tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6321054920964780245.post760377438878504986..comments2023-10-25T02:29:35.524-07:00Comments on Livi Wilmore CG Arts & Animation: Psycho Film ReviewAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00717890309388844969noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6321054920964780245.post-67394157533934765932014-01-23T11:34:46.139-08:002014-01-23T11:34:46.139-08:00also - and yes, picky picky - but you've got i...also - and yes, picky picky - but you've got irregular spacing between your paragraphs. Just get into the habit of 'previewing' your posts before you publish, so you can fine tune the visual experience of your blog posts prior to committing them to your audience. You just need to be more immaculate, Livi - quality control, m'dear!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6321054920964780245.post-46690583675358247532014-01-23T02:19:03.433-08:002014-01-23T02:19:03.433-08:00It '...gives the events in which the music rea...It '...gives the events in which the music reaches it’s climax a rawer more bludgeoned feel.' - good choice of wording! :)<br /><br />Just the same points as last time really Livi - make sure your film names are in italics, and don't justify the text in the bibliography as this is giving you big, unsightly gaps. Choose the left hand-hand alignment, and that should sort it out.<br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com